Comments for Cup of Blooming Constellations

Comment on I speak for the trees, for the trees have no tongues by Jackie

Jackie — Thu, 12 Aug 2010 19:47:45 +0000

I love the title, but then I got sort of lost in the details of the prosy text. To me, you can say so much more with poetry and say it so timelessly.

Comment on Flow of Plastic by Hanna Brown

Hanna Brown — Tue, 10 Aug 2010 19:42:21 +0000

“Plastic freedom
fills the molds of our unfulfilled

secondhand hearts
cracked as dashboards under strict sun.”

-My favorite part.

BTW: More poetry, please!

Comment on United Approaches – Blackout Poem by Hanna Brown

Hanna Brown — Fri, 11 Jun 2010 08:02:02 +0000

haha I thought it was great even before I read that it is extracted from a postal service note. Good job creating a hidden message…

“No road
Obstruction
No road”

Comment on I speak for the trees, for the trees have no tongues by sarcozona

sarcozona — Sat, 08 May 2010 14:01:06 +0000

Yes! New forestry techniques are promising. And building and stewarding forests for carbon sequestration makes me so hopeful.

Comment on Drifting Airship by Hanna

Hanna — Tue, 23 Mar 2010 00:48:04 +0000

^ My favorite too. I really like the style you seem to be developing as of late.

Comment on Drifting Airship by Andrew

Andrew — Sun, 21 Mar 2010 04:33:37 +0000

this is a great poem man. keep it up!
-drew

Comment on Drifting Airship by Jackie

Jackie — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 19:51:03 +0000

Jared

This is my favorite one yet. I hope to see them keep coming.

Jackie

Comment on Much Adage About Nothing by Hanna

Hanna — Sat, 13 Mar 2010 03:42:17 +0000

I suppose it was the tempo- I’m not sure exactly… but I just love the way this reads.

Comment on Distracted by Echoes by Jared

Jared — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 22:22:49 +0000

That one was written down without much tweaking. Just kinda came to me in its entirety, but never thought it full enough to be finished at the time. But when I read back over it, I thought shiny.

Comment on Distracted by Echoes by Jackie

Jackie — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 17:55:49 +0000

Jared

Maybe I just don’t have enough patience in reading poetry, but something about the succintness of this one appeals to me.